[New-Poetry] Terrain.org: TOOT

[orphee]

"Dawn knives through cypress & pine, casts slatted shadows over Depot Creek.
He tightlines.  
                     I eye a cork."



Dawn knives?  eye a cork?  creeks and depots?   even from my foreign eye this 
sounds stitlted.!




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From: Anny Ballardini <anny.ballardini at gmail.com>
To: NewPoetry List <new-poetry at wiz.cath.vt.edu>
Sent: Thu, October 14, 2010 2:10:29 AM
Subject: Re: [New-Poetry] Terrain.org: TOOT

I would also like to add that not only David Graham, but James Finnegan, too, 
bathes these waters, sometimes.


On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 8:09 AM, Anny Ballardini <anny.ballardini at gmail.com> 
wrote:

I love this opening:
>
>
>Dawn knives through  cypress & pine, 
>casts slatted shadows  over Depot Creek.
>He tightlines.  
>                     I eye a cork.
>
>
>and the entire poem, congratulations Jeff!
>Anny
>
>
>
>On Wed, Oct 13, 2010 at 8:44 PM, Jeff Newberry <jeff.newberry at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>Following David Graham's lead, I want to point out that a new issue of Simmons 
>Buntin's Terrain.org:  A Journal of the Built & Natural Environments is live.  
>Here's a good place to begin reading this fine issue:
>>
>>http://www.terrain.org/poetry/26/newberry.htm
>>
>>The issue is chock full of good writing.  Check it out.
>>
>>Best,
>>Jeff Newberry
>>
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