[New-Poetry] Scholarly dispute

[Bob Grumman]

On 11/17/2010 6:15 AM, Bob Grumman wrote:
>
>>     Spring was never waiting for us, girl
>>     It ran one step ahead
>>
>
> I quite like the lines above.  The rest is awful, but no worse, for 
> me, than the lyrics of many pop songs.
>
> --Bob

Well, yes, I'd drop the "girl."

--Bob
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