[New-Poetry] "the day lady died"

[Jason Quackenbush]

That's what I love about Frank O'Hara. He's got that great rambling  
conversational tone, but whenever you look closer to see if there are  
any excess words, you don't really find any.

On Jan 29, 2009, at 6:37 PM, Bob Grumman wrote:

> Jason, I do like this poem.  I find it concise.  Every word is  
> needed.  Well, probably not every word is needed, but every word  
> adds to the poem.  Maybe it's the same poem as the Dickinson poem  
> except a hundred years later?
>
> --Bob
>
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Jason Quackenbush
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