[New-Poetry] Alexander's text
James Cervantes
cervantes.james at gmail.com
Wed Jan 21 10:26:06 EST 2009
Not to mention that "thorn and din" is such a clunker. But, my hat goes off
to anyone who will/can write for an occasion.
- Jim
2009/1/21 Bob Grumman <bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net>
>
>
> All about us is noise. All about us is
> noise and bramble, thorn and din, each
> one of our ancestors on our tongues.
>
> I liked this stanza though the last line is a bit forced in its attempt
> to highlight the glories of multiculturalism. Hey, I could go farther: I
> have "every/ one of EVERYbody's ancestors on my tongue." Really, our
> tongues are from our ancestors but what's on them isn't necessarily.
>
> Someone is stitching up a hem, darning
> a hole in a uniform, patching a tire,
> repairing the things in need of repair.
>
> This made me think of politicians who
>
> repair things into need of repair.
>
> --Bob G.
>
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