[New-Poetry] For the WEPD experiment: Houseman's Poem
Bob Grumman
bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net
Tue Feb 3 10:44:38 EST 2009
John Jeffrey wrote:
>
> Bob,
>
> I do agree that your reading is as reasonable as mine. And yes, the
> poem talks about cherry trees/ in bloom/--but if you're going to be
> that literal (not cherry trees, but cherry trees in bloom) then I
> would think that you'd stumble with "About the woodlands I will go /
> To see the cherry hung with snow." He doesn't say, "/looking/ as if
> they are hung with snow." He specifically says "hung with snow." So
> if you're following a literal reading, then you've got a bit of a snow
> problem. But if you're going to say that the snow is metaphoric, or
> symbolic, or even just an image for blooms, then that would open the
> door for a less-literal reading of the rest of the poem.
>
Then what's "look at things in bloom" a metaphor for? Actually, I take
it as a synecdoche for spring. It doesn't work, in my view, as any kind
of trope for "the beauty of cherry trees," though the "blooms along the
bough" could.
I did see your argument before you presented it, but the opposite is
true, too: if you take "snow" as literal, you have to take "look at
things in bloom" literally by your reasoning, too, and you can't.
Sorry, I can't get past "look at things in bloom." Trees with snow on
them aren't in bloom. And I have given other reasons against the
interpretation that I'll repeat when (or if) I get to my evaluation,
which I've only just sketched, so far.
>
> And if the Mole is worth 20 of me, then he's... let me think... 20
> times... carry the 4... hmmm. Ah, who cares. Math is stupit.
>
> JohnJ
>
'Cause you know I'm right!
--Bob
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