[New-Poetry] For the WEPD experiment: Houseman's Poem
TheOldMole
Opus40-01 at opus40.org
Tue Feb 3 10:14:35 EST 2009
And that a young man is saying it, is understanding that 50 years may
have little room, seems rather extraordinary, but that's where reading
the rest of A Shropshire Lad gives s hint. The "young men" in Housman's
world are a dark bunch. That middle stanza is proof that this is now
simple youth.
I don't think he does really understand it, and that's part of the power
of the poem.
Judy Prince wrote:
> I know one who'd heartily second your 'take' on AEH's Dark Side, John.
>
> And I concur about H's 'pretty' and 'simple' wrapping around Deeper
> Stuff. He might be a right clivver dude; I'm not sure. Might just be
> a nutcase.
>
> Judy enjoying your humour as well as your logic, naturally.
>
> 2009/2/3 John Jeffrey <jjeffreymail at yahoo.com
> <mailto:jjeffreymail at yahoo.com>>
>
> Funny, I see it as the opposite: that it heightens the urgency.
> Since 50 springs is little room, you need /every/ season, not
> just spring. You need to go in both spring /and/ winter.
>
> And that a young man is saying it, is understanding that 50 years
> may have little room, seems rather extraordinary, but that's where
> reading the rest of A Shropshire Lad gives s hint. The "young
> men" in Housman's world are a dark bunch. That middle stanza is
> proof that this is now simple youth.
>
> To me, reading this as a straight
> Oh-I'd-betta-go-look-at-da-pretty-twees-wite-now seems rather
> light, which is one of the major mistakes reading Housman's
> sing-song sounding poems. They always roll of the tongue so
> pretty, always rhyme so nicely, but they're generally not "pretty"
> or "nice." And looking at a bare tree hung with snow--since that's
> all you've got in winter--because you know that you may not make
> it to next spring is right up Housman's alley, or should I say
> right up his woodland ride.
>
> Just more thoughts when I should be working.
>
> JohnJ
>
>
> --- On *Mon, 2/2/09, TheOldMole /<Opus40-01 at opus40.org
> <mailto:Opus40-01 at opus40.org>>/* wrote:
>
> From: TheOldMole <Opus40-01 at opus40.org
> <mailto:Opus40-01 at opus40.org>>
>
> Subject: Re: [New-Poetry] For the WEPD experiment: Houseman's Poem
> To: "NewPoetry: Contemporary Poetry News & Views"
> <new-poetry at wiz.cath.vt.edu <mailto:new-poetry at wiz.cath.vt.edu>>
> Date: Monday, February 2, 2009, 11:06 PM
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>
> That knocks the underpinnings out of the whole sense of urgency, Don't
> worry, it's not just the 50 springs, you have winters too. And summers and
> falls too...what the heck. The whole point is that for most very young men,
> fifty years is an eternity -- and yet, only a very young man is capable of that
> special kind of wonder to say that 50 springs is little room.
>
> John Jeffrey wrote:
> > Right: he has little time to look at things in bloom; therefore he must go
> out even when they're not in bloom and see the beauty of them when they are
> hung with snow. Just the way I've read it for my two score years and ten.
> >
> > JohnJ
> >
> >
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> > *From:* Bob Grumman <bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net <mailto:bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net>>
> > *To:* "NewPoetry: Contemporary Poetry News & Views"
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> > *Sent:* Monday, February 2, 2009 10:18:15 PM
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> >
> >
> >> You could argue that it's a stretch, perhaps, but I don't
> think it's blatantly wrong.
> > Agreed.
> >
> >> The poem doesn't have any hard evidence against it.
> > But it does: And since because the speaker has little time "to look
> at things in BLOOM," he is going into the woodlands to see the cherry hung
> with snow. If they're literally hung with snow, they won't be in bloom.
> To be reminded of blooms is not looking at them.
> > --Bob
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