[New-Poetry] Alicia Stallings on rhyme
Bob Grumman
bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net
Mon Feb 2 21:01:10 EST 2009
Michael Snider wrote:
> http://www.poetryfoundation.org/journal/feature.html?id=182841
>
> She's my hero. An excerpt:
>
> -----------
> All rhymed poetry must be rhyme-driven. This is no longer to be
> considered pejorative.
>
> Rhyme is at the wheel. No, rhyme is the engine.
>
> Rhyme is an engine of syntax: like meter, it understands the
> importance of prepositions.
>
> English is not rhyme poor. It is only uninflected. On the contrary,
> English has a richness in rhymes across different parts of speech;
> whereas in many other languages, rhyme is often merely a coincident
> jingle of accidence.
>
> There are no tired rhymes. There are no forbidden rhymes. Rhymes are
> not predictable unless lines are. Death and breath, womb and tomb,
> love and of, moon, June, spoon, all still have great poems ahead of them.
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>
> Huzzah!
I like what she says. I think bad rhymes aren't the fault of the . . .
rhymenants, I call them, but of their placement. "love/above" is often
a bad rhyme not because of the two words but because "love" is misplaced
in order to get it where it can end-rhyme as in "Give your love/ to God
above." Or rhymes can be too expected and therefore very irritating due
to the triteness of the poem they're in. If a poet has a "you" at the
end of one line, then immediately brings in the sky, you know "blue" is
gonna come up.
Also, she exaggerates. I think great rhyming poems are in part driven,
have to be driven, by rhyme, but the can be driven in part by other
things--and should be.
What I like most is that she makes it clear she's talking about "rhymed
poetry," not "poetry."
--Bob
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