[New-Poetry] An Elephant Poem
David Bircumshaw
david.bircumshaw at ntlworld.com
Sat May 10 02:42:18 EDT 2008
> When Rossetti died the contents auctioned off,
> and the elephant sold to a circus in Leeds.
I like the story, James. A query: in US English do you use 'auctioned
off' in that way? The sentence, to my mind, is screaming out for a
missing 'were' before 'auctioned' or 'was' before 'sold' as the grammar
of the sentence demands such but maybe that's just to British ears.
Best
Dave
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