[New-Poetry] terror dactyls
Bob Grumman
bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net
Fri Apr 4 22:12:20 EST 2008
Well, it's all a matter of what you think essential to haiku and sonnets
after hundreds of years of them. A problem with your outlook seems to
me what isn't a sonnet? For my book on haiku and related poems, I
spelled out pretty exactly what I think makes a haiku, and it's a set of
elements (how else can one define anything?), but not all needed, just
most of them, if properly weighted. Season word is good but not
essential. Juxtaposition of images essential. Etc. I haven't done the
same with the sonnet but feel if you allow any 14-liners, you lose the
essence of the sonnet OR you simply confuse the issue with the
complication of having to define kinds of sonnets, and we already have
enough kinds of sonnets.
As for no regular iambs, well, a lotta people got fooled. But I think
you define iambs differently from me. For me, they're just dah DAH dah
DAH. I don't care if the second DAH is weaker than the first dah. And,
of course, one can't stick to a strict rhythm forever, but one should do
so long enough to establish it. And call it out of meter when it is,
not say it's some strict meter everywhere, no matter what it does.
Soon I'll settle all this PERMANENTLY at my blog. Maybe. At any rate,
it's a fun topic. (And I like lots of poems their authors call sonnets
and I don't.)
--Bob
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