[New-Poetry] This deep image
Bob Grumman
bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net
Mon Oct 1 18:06:42 EDT 2007
James Cervantes wrote:
> This deep image went to market.
> This deep image stayed home.
> This deep image had a lake
> and this deep image had the stone.
> This steep image went down down
> down down down . . .
>
> -- Jim
>
>
I like this quite a bit. As an irrepressible tinkerer, though, I had to
change its first line to, "This deep image transcended all markets."
Sorry, but I just can't imagine a deep image going to any market. But
it's funnier your way.
--Bob G.
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