[New-Poetry] This deep image

Bob Grumman bobgrumman at nut-n-but.net
Mon Oct 1 18:06:42 EDT 2007


James Cervantes wrote:
> This deep image went to market.
> This deep image stayed home.
> This deep image had a lake
> and this deep image had the stone.
> This steep image went down down
> down down down . . .
>
> -- Jim
>
>   
I like this quite a bit.  As an irrepressible tinkerer, though, I had to 
change its first line to, "This deep image transcended all markets."  
Sorry, but I just can't imagine a deep image going to any market.  But 
it's funnier your way.

--Bob G.



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