[New-Poetry] I of the Storm

[Anny Ballardini]

No, I did not say this. What I wanted to say - which I did not say _ is
that this book is a story with an introduction a corpus and an end, even if Lavender does not give an end. 
A story or better, a long prose poem, needs a development with its highs and lows. 
I know they quote an entire passage on that page, and I don't think it is necessary because it gives the wrong idea of what the book is. 
   
  From: JforJames at aol.com 
  Sent: Sunday, May 06, 2007 9:35 PM


  In a message dated 5/6/2007 2:43:34 PM Eastern Daylight Time, anny.ballardini at tin.it writes:
    thesis & antithesis
    fine with me.

    I think that Bill Lavender's work in this book should not be excerpted, it is a continuum that ends with Katrina. I think it is important to give this key.
  Anny,
  The press/webpage you pointed to excerpted him...
  http://www.lavenderink.org/iofthestorm/

  An important event in human history is an excuse for flaccid poetry?

  Finnegan


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