[New-Poetry] Poetic dialogue?

[Joseph Duemer]

There is a bit of Baudelaire decadence I like, but I agree that sharpness of
language -- more specific nouns & verbs & fewer adjectives & adverbs --
would help the work. I like the prose poem as a form, though I've never been
very good at writing them. I think you have a sense of prose rhythm that
carries the images along & I'd encourage you to think in terms of images.


On 12/26/06, Rebuketheworld at aol.com <Rebuketheworld at aol.com> wrote:
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>  Jeff and Mole, thank you for your feedback. I will put some of your
> advice to work. ~Raven
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Joseph Duemer
Professor of Humanities
Clarkson University
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